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for it will never happen...it can\'t

by nera

person Trelweny
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how you ended this with a chapter in Narcissa's point of view.

Thanks for writing.
person wudelfin
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
although the grammer stunk, the storyline made up for it. glad i read it.
person Lily
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, think you should bring Lucius back, as a twist. and say Hermione had a baby boy, perhaps Lucius is trying to change toboy into a monster like Lucius was.
I dont know, but dont end it! I love it!
person kinky
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool,spellings a little crap but then this isn't exactly literature school. Loved the plot the smut and the ending.!!!
person lauren
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far i have found the story very interesting but a little confusing but i say keep the story going very good thx Lauren
person lauren
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story plz continue
person Anon
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its really good, i cant wait for you to finish da nxt chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kitiara Starfire
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I will have to go see if you wrote more. Yes, a beta reader would have done well, but it still was easy to read and understand.
person Jessica
schedule May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I\'ve been getting all of your e-mails, but for some reason it won\'t let me respond. Every time I try to send one back, it says your e-mail is an \"invalid e-mail recipient.\" So, I\'m not sure if you have me blocked or something. Anyway, is there another address I could e-mail you at or something? I have the first three chapters beta\'d. Thanks! -Jessica
person Jessica
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just got your e-mail, and I\'d be happy to beta for you. For some reason, though, your e-mail isn\'t working. :/