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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I love the Sirius character I think he needs to be dead. Surely if he was alive he\'d been watching after his godson and would have done something to those horrible muggles. Can\'t wait for chapter 5!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is great but you might try to change how you write the story so it isn\'t quite so forced and hard to understand. You could change the point of view when harry wakes up or at least use more personal pronouns and stay with each character a little longer. Other then that it\'s a great concept.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 7. Or is that 5. Poor Harry!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more soon please
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.... I can\'t wait for part 4!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is very good. Still think you need a beta. Can\'t wait for chapter 6.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 3! Severus is Harry\'s father? Why does he look like James? Albus and Minerva are his grandparents? He\'s a pureblood? Holy moly! That happens next?