rate_review Reviews

I apologize for I don\'t usually say this but your story needs help. I have read so many stories that have had the potential to be great...if only they had taken the time to look it over and make the grammar, spelling, and tense correct. I believe your story has a lot of potential. Maybe a beta would be in order? I know I don\'t like to look over my own stories...I\'m very lazy...>< I also understand that no one gets much of anything out of writing over the internet. That was my excuse when people complained about my stories. I would offer myself up to beta for you but as my situation is a smidge precarious...I would not be able to work right.
Once again I apologize if I have offended you,
Faye Everwyn

I LIKe I like please please please update A S P

I\'m glad they are going to pay for what they did. Can\'t wait for chapter 13!

Well done again!

I love this story please please plesae please please please please please please please update A S P
I Readlly like this.
I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

THANKS

oooh im luving still--- :D :D more soon... bad Lucius!

awwww this is such a sad story yet oddly happy story. i think making Snape harry\'s father is a great idea. it is nice to see a softer side of him once in awhile. having dumbledore and mcgonagal married is interesting. please post more chapters soon i want to see what happens with harry/draco as well as with harry\'s relationship with his father

I think draco\'s mother should be on the light side and that Ron and hermione will take Draco and harry\'s relationship very well and maybe severes\'s should be alive

Can\'t wait for chapter 9!

I love this fic, I think Sirius should be alive, Severus should be in a relationship with the newly single OOTP member Narcissa, Ron should flip out over the H/D thing, and...yeah, I think that\'s it. Please update soon!!