rate_review Reviews

WTF is wrong with you?? Your story makes no sense and i just can\'t pic harry that weak, to be \'Raped\' by his uncle, and just FYI, you need to put up WARNING ahead of time..

I hate rape stories..It shows that the authors has not talent whatsoever, ehen it comes to creatititr or imgination...

Your story is horrible and once i got to the rape part, i just couldn\'t believe it..I stoped and if i know that this story had raped in it, i wouldn\'t have
read this TRASH!!!

It\'s just that all of the other HP stories or allt he other stories are gone and there isn\'t much left to be read..The quality of the stories, anyway..

not bad, hope to read more later. and about the grammer, i really don\'t care, i didn\'t mind it. made sence to me, and who cares what the other blithers thingk any way.

First of all, I think that your story is promising. You have a great plot and all, and you are writing what makes you confrontable. You are writing your way and all and you know that. Come give yourself a pat on the back for doing a good job. You do your own work and you will be fine. But you are doing a great job for your story and all. But I can\'t wait until whats next. Keep the good work and if you have any comments and question or something like that, look me up from that directory. Like I said, keep up the work.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley

good story..
Weird how harry and draco have the same background
ahh well
good luck
x
email me when u update

Hey hon!

great story so far. I like the plot line and all, but when you have people talking could you put in the \"\" it makes it easier to read in some places. Don\'t get me wrong, i love the story, but I have a little bit of problems knowing what is text and what is spoken.

Cheers and keep up the good work!

Kat

I got to chapter 6...
get a beta, a real beta, because the grammar and wording is simply terrible. Seriously.

please write another chapter soon! this is really good! at first i didnt like the idea of harry and snape being father and son, but now i do. its was done well.

please write another chapter soon! this is really good! at first i didnt like the idea of harry and snape being father and son, but now i do. it was done well.

I am soo enjoying this story!! I so can\'t wait for the next chappy!!! Your doing a great job on the story. Update ASAP!!!

I just found this story it is SO good, I can\'t wait to read more and see what happenes with everyone. How Ron and Hermione and the rest will react when they find out. Just wish the chapters were a bit longer. Can\'t wait to read more.

SeaBreeze :-)