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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 15! The story has gotten better! Well done!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon... and.. hmm.. drunk's I think been done so has soulmate potions... though for remus/Sirius?Severus I don't think I've read any potion accidents... so I go with the potion accident.
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me again. I really do think the concept of your story has potential, but your writing needs work. I waited and waited to see what you were going to do with this and hoped that you would obtain a good beta that could work with you on your writing style. I am sorry it really is just to difficult to read.
I wish you luck though.
I wish you luck though.
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I think it should be a soulmate potion. Please update soon.
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You might want to go back through previos chapters and remove the notes your beta left in there for you to read.
Other than that its an awesome start and I'm going to go and read more.
Other than that its an awesome start and I'm going to go and read more.
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think they should all get drunk to celebrate the trial victory over the Dursleys and Sirius' new freedom and someone (I vote for Sirius - Remus is too common and Sev needs to be able to make Potions) gets pregnant. By the way, great story!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're supposed to remove the beta's comments... ^^;;;
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please let me know when you update. llpebbles23@yahoo.com
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wish you would update soon
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo love this! Can't wait for section 8!