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for To Love and To Lose

by RWHandLoraineProductions

schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
another angst ridden chapter. hurry up and get the two of them back together. i hate to see Jessica so lost and alone.

let her find Severus

~blessings~
ldf
person Corazon
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! The suspense is building! She\'s gonna
find out he\'s a wizard! (I am assuming!) I hope
she takes it well.

Hugs,
Corazon
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just love the plot...sexy and mysterious!

I sent your fan fic to my friend Jessica and she was amazed and ecstatic that there was a character who shared the same name with her, managing to bed Snape. ha! Wonderful fic.

-Blue Ribbon
person Corazon
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RWH,

Very nice!

Hugs,
Corazon
person gothicmuse13
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter and I love how it is building and getting more and more interesting! I\'m sorry that I didn\'t review chapter fifteen but life got in the way. Can\'t wait to read more!
person Seraphina
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus, I hope he finds Jessica soon...oh, the suspense is killing me. Tell you what though, I\'m really glad you had Severus hex her building manager, even if it only was Obliviate, at least he\'ll have a sore head. Looking forward to the next chapter and hopefully the \"daddy\" revelation!
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello, red, darling!

the new chappie is up, as well as a little note at the bottom. a frined fond a complterly smashing artist to draw the handfasting. you can find a link to her site there, as well as my yahoo group, where the pic can also be found.

as to this last chapter..........oh, you scheming little witch! you left it with such a horrid cliffie! i could curse you. but, once again, it\'s good. i love the Master obliviating the super into the wall. i hope it hurt too, you son of a bitch! go Severus!

look forward to the next one. can\'t wait to see what happens. i just know malfoy will be getting his.........

hugs, darling

brightest blessings!

blessed be
ldf
person aprilgrey
schedule August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update. It quite made my evening and I\'m very much looking forward to the next one. This is a very exciting story!
person Corazon
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RWH,

Good chapter! I can\'t wait for
the next one. The suspense
is killing me. *longer chapters,
longer chapters* (I only chant
this when I am enjoying the story
so much!!!!!)

Hugs,
Corazon
person Seraphina
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What is poor Jessica going to do now? Brilliant chapter! I am on the edge of my seat now in anticipation, how could you have been so cruel as to leave me worrying about both of them like this!? Looking forward to the next chapter so please keep up the good work. And I\'m nicely rested up now, thanor aor asking.