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for To Love and To Lose

by RWHandLoraineProductions

person AprilGrey
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am so enjoying this. Keep writing. Wonderful OC character and I love your Sev, too. There are just so many wayss sts story can go that I can\'t wait for the next update. Many thanks for a terrific story!
person Seraphina
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, I like the way Severus finds it hard to keep his mind off Jessica, it\'s so sweet. I don\'t know how you can say you think you\'re not good at sex scenes, the initial one was very sexy AND romantic, really lovely. I find your portrayal of Severus as a gentle, thoughtful lover really appealing and believable. Thanks for such a speedy chapter.
person Seraphina
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story, very enjoyable. I don\'t usually read SS/ SS/OC, more SS/HG but I do like your character Jessica. I\'m looking forward to your next chapter as I\'m curious to find out where your\'e going with the explosion thing; and of course keeping my fingers crossed for some more lovely sexy scenes.
person Corazon
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy!

\"But then, if this was what Dracula looked like then he can
bite me all he wanted to,\" ooh, so nice! I also like the vision of Remus
and Lupin hanging in the dungeons.

Seriously, for Jessica to feel the magnatism from Severus enough to
give her virginity to him - now that was erotic! I really like this story.

Hugs,
Corazon
person DEM
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
explosion? whats that? come on write more please!