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I have only just discovbered this story and...... WOW! the storyline is intriguing, i keep wondering what will happen next and I love your artful blend of canon and AU. Of course my enjoyment is also furthered by plenty of Snape action too. Can't wait to see what happens to old Moldyshorts when he takes that altered potion!

Hi there, just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know I really love your story. I've been reading it for a while now, and bookmarked it so I can check now and then to see if the new update is up or not. :)

I really like how you write the characters, both the cannon as the original ones. I can say in all honesty that this is one of the better stories I've read on this site, and I've read a lot of stories here. So keep up the good work, and thanks for writing it. :)

I only recently stumbled upon this story, and am utterly and completely hooked. The story is splendid, the characters very believable, and I can truly say that this is one of the best fan fictions I've read, and I've read a lot over the years. :)

Keep up the great work... I'll definitely be watching it for updates. :)

It,s certainly going to be interesting when Kiaya is going to meet Lucius.....I am still totally addicted to this story.
Please keep writing and update soon!!!! It,s brilliant.

hello,
I just finished reading up the chapter 47 part two and wow. It took a couple of days and lots of free time. I have to say at first I was a little lost. Not understanding the jump in the first chapter to the secound. Once I worked it out, it was better smooth sailing. I really enjoy this story it is filled with lots of drama and plot. I also like the slow build of relationships and not just 'I am madly in love and run straight into it'. love that life isn't perfect and how char's grow and change. I love reading Lusicus needs to have control and becomes that cruel man. Then i also love Snape because you have written my prefect Snape.
I can't wait for more of this amazing story to come out. I would like to see into a tiny bit of draco's brain as he is giving those gifts from his 'father' to the teacher. Also would like to know if he reports back to his father when Snape steps in and out does him ever time.

Wow, I am speechless... I have just finished reading your story. It is brilliant!!! It is so well written and I love your characters. What a fantastic idea to bring Sirius back and your Snape is sooooo yummy!!!! I have just spent the last three days in absolute bliss reading this story and it is definately the best i've read in a long long time. Please, Please carry on writing like this. The next chapter can't come soon enough.I am totally addicted to this story!!!.....WELL DONE.

I have spent all of my free time in the last two days reading your story and I just wanted you to know that I am really into it. I really find it a good companion/background to the actual HP story that I can see it folding in really well. I like the fact that it doesn't focus on the Golden Trio as much as the others that come into the story. I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story and I hope you update it again soon. Please keep writing and I hope your muse doesn't fail you.(I like that you found a way for Sirius to come back and try again with Jasmine.)

Looking forward to more,
Jennifer

Fun story! Great character development. Hope to see more chapters soon!

Hey there, I meant to say in my earlier review that the story's categorization may be depressing the number of readers/reviewers you have been getting. People have their favorite characters and with so many stories here, they often stay within certain character's sub-categories. I don't know if it's possible, but if you added this story to one or more additional categories like Sirius/OFC and Snape/OFC, you would probably increase your readership significantly.

Just a thought - I really don't know if it's possible to add categories once a story is up and running. I hope so, it's a really terrific one and deserves more readers.

Wow! I've spent the last couple of nights reading this story. It is now 3:36 a.m. but I couldn't stop. Your characters are beautifully realized, the plots and settings are perfectly executed, your dialogue is natural and true-to-life. It's just a wonderful, engrossing read. Siriusly (that's my one) it's a hell of a yarn. And it's nice to see Sirius get some - he's so fantastic and so often overlooked. I *knew* he couldn't just be dead behind that veil! I've always wanted to know more about the veil so I'm really glad you went there.

I adore your OFCs, though I'm surprised Snape let Jasmine get away. It's nice that you made him a good father although I think that ill-tempered goat is having a bad effect on Arielle's temper. I look forward to Snape's adventures with his virginal and suddenly extremely horny assistant. Lucius' plans for her have piqued my interest as well.

I can't wait for more - my hat's off to you. It's an amazingly good story.