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for One in pain

by Sheerah

person madamshark
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful work, good plot so far I am intrigued wondering what you will write next. Looking forward to more chapters.
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good, my dear. realistic mentality on hermione\'s behalf. if you need a beta, look me up. i\'m always willing ot further the decline of society, in any way i can!

brava, keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the ending to chapter eight update soon!
person Bree
schedule June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far I think that the story is excellent. I know that it might be difficult for you, but I would really like to read more ASAP. I\'m hoping that the overall goal in the story is to have Hermione and Severus together. Hopefully my review will inspire you to continue to write and keep it updated, because that would be greatyou you did! Good luck with the rest of it and I can\'t wait to read more!!
person Kim
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Keep it coming!
Kim
person Tori
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story was really good! Also i read you needed a beta. I could be more than happy to beta for you, my email address is Tori89uk@ntlworlm Tm
person Pammy
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good stuff. I\'m crazy about Hermione fics and this is really good. Love the plot and can\'t wait for more. Keep the chapters coming!!
person XxXenia
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update! For the love of humanity. Great and involving plot. And I love H/S pairings!
person Bree
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time that I saw this fic and I started to read it because I love Severus and Hermione stories. It\'s really good and I\'m apprehensive to know what happens. Please keep it updated!!!
person Santolina
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok. e-mail me a link when you post a new chapter please. i luv it! i almost cried because that is what my father did to my mother but he didn\'t kill her because she pulled the gun on him and took me and left.