rate_review Reviews

Thus far, it has a solid plot base, but you seem to be dragging it out. I don\'t know if this is from writters block, or what have you, but I\'d be more please with this story if the chapters were more \"complete thoughts\" rather than fragments, but I am not a fan of the \"cliffies\" at all. Overall, I think you\'ve got a good idea and should stay on it, but as I said, I\'d like a more complete chapter, a full scene with foreshadowing towards a later or next scene, the chapters seem very choppy they don\'t quite flow into each other, but I would like to see this story complete, and will continue to read it.

This is a very sad story, but it\'s wonderful.
Poor Hermione...

Anna

Poor Mione.... I can\'t belive it..... but it\'s a great story, and keep wrighting!

R

I\'ve had the first 7 chapters sitting in my comp forever, and finally started digging things out. Came back to find new chapters. Keep them ng ang and I\'ll keep visiting. It\'s great!

Chapters 1-9... I just read what you have done of this story & am hoping that you will be able to add more soon!!! I am very curious to see what ens ens when they find out that Hermione is gone!!! Will Severus realize that he cares even more so than he already has addmited to himself? Where is her father? Can\'t wait to find out!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<

This is so sad, but well written. It\'s too bad that victims do often feel that it is their fault - her comment about Malfoy was pretty accurate. I do hope you are still working on this story, as I just discovered it this evening.

Great story. Hope you keep writing. I can\'t wait to read more!

Ah! Finally. A great update, and you leave me wanting so much more. Ow, Iw, I wonder whereabouts in the forest she is, and whether it is truly safe, or something just to lull her into a danger? Heh. I\'ll be waiting for the update!

Keep writing,

Laerai

The last few chapters have been *painfully* short. They\'ood ood but short as all hell. Could you try to lengthen them when your computer is up and working again?

please please some more i think that is s i d i don\'t know but i luv it
can u please email me when the next chapters r up please
luv joanna