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for James Potter's Good Day

by TheLadyFeylene

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now this IS supposed to be a harry/james so i think it would have been better if they found out who each other are AFTER they had sex.
person Villain
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How very fascinating... and well written. There seems to be everything here, including humor--which was perfectly subtle. Both of their reactions were equally convincing, by the way. Especially for such a tough and abstract situation. Good lord, this is so well done!

Thanks for this very enjoyable interlude!

Mischievously,
~*Villain*~

person nerak
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first read this fic at PSA and couldn\'t resist hunting you down to leave a review somewhere... i\'m really surprised that this fic got a 3 star, since it\'s one of my fav HP fic ever!

since i read that bit you had on your ff.net profile about what you want from reviewers, well, i\'ll do my best. imho incest fics are quite hard to write. there\'s whole fascination of (not quite)abomination with the idea of incest, but in this fic, there\'s just this extra twistedness to it with james\' reaction to it. or lack of. i love the james in here; it\'s like waiting for something to explode while being tied to a chair. the general idea (james not dead and meets harry) is not new, but the execution of the idea is very nice. and makes a lot more sense then the usual \"oh my gosh you\'re son so all the sudden i now how to be a father and shower all these fatherly affection on you\". then again, i just adore messed up minds like james. harry, well, say you\'re going to die a horrendous death soon and you are oking for this random dude to shag you? adds an interesting layer to his character. (just see harry as starving for physical affection type).

well, all in all, i love this fic, and you should write a sequel!! i\'ll love to read it.
person Caitlyn
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you write James. It seems like you have a good grasp of the character.
person Luci Shadow
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! a james/harry fic! ^o^ those are so rare, not to mention hard to find... and, bonus: a very good one too! even if I still think it\'s a pity they didn\'t get to fuck... sequel? pretty please?
person Chris\'EvilKitten
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...interesting...a little strange but veryereseresting. Well written. Harry seemed to be a little too calm about the whole his dad still wants to screw himng. ng. Thats hot....lol....(hot as in cool...or shibby) Great job
person Hyperbole
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was... interesting. I want a sequal though, one where they do fuck but then I\'m weird that way, I want Pottercest!

Thanks for the link.
person sheila
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kinda good, except it\'s got nothing to do with Harry and well it\'s a disappionting fic.
person moi
schedule June 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I\'m not really big on incest but this was really well written! Please update soon!
person Sarryn
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Highly amusing. Is there more?