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for The Tale of a Very Long Tongue

by Keshu

person Anon
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sick
person SchuylerD
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was gross but very hot, too. What a weird er, animal! Well written and an odd and interesting idea.
person SchuylerD
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want to clarify that I thought it was gross because it\'s sex with an animal but the animal did come on to Ron, right? So he wasn\'t the one forcing it to do anything to him. Original ideas for sure. I liked the story. What else have you written? And yes, what was Ron doing playing with a wand that way? He might hurt himself!
person me
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that..was..wrong...haha....honstly though when i read that book, i thought the same thing...
person RaRaRachel
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Niki, Niki, Niki....
*pisses self laughing*

Yet another fantastic and original story.
person Atobflo
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
In Soviet Russia, the *ans* rs* rear *YOU*!
person Krista
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"...caressing him deeper than even a wand had gone...\"

What was Ron doing with a wand up his ass, Keshu?!

Anyway, wow! AWESOME story! It was so... weird... in a great sense!