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by BeckyHoadley

person akitso
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A truly beautiful story. Sad, romantic, and the perfect example of true, raw love.
I love how it was writen, I loved the story line. And if there were any spelling mistakes, I did not notice them.
Beautiful story.
person HecateDeMort
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so great plese write a sequel
person candygirl
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Wow, that was really sweet. A very original idea, and you did a good job with it. I would have liked to see it more fleshed out and with MORE SMUT, but that\'s a personal preference.
person Raija
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is soooo sad but then again there\'s hope. I like it.... and it make me cry.
person Sarryn
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and bittersweet. Very nice.
person Photis
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi - this is a really good repost - I have a vague memory of your story as a standard \'way to get harry and severus together quickly\', but this repost has made into something a lot more moving and believable. really enjoyed reading it!
person mikochef22
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful, I cried, stupid me, the story was great very touching and for once im glad that it wasn\'t sexually grafic I think it wouldn\'t have been right here. Thank You Very Much ;)
person ~~Minerva
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it there, love it here.. hehehe, I hope you write a sequel to it, it\'s be interesting to see. U think your a great authoress!! Keep up the great work. ~~Minerva