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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again I would like to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this--obviously not because I find pain and misery enjoyable but because of the writing and the twists in plot structure--and I congratulate you. There is one part that surprised me: that Percy forgave Ron. I\'m not condemning the decision, but considering how traumatizing Oliver\'s death was I would have thought that Percy would have needed more time for forgiveness than a year. However, I also understand that Ron was his brother and it\'s hard to let go of that connection. The Marcus part was very interesting. Another facet that makes this story interesting is that most of the characters seem to believe that Percy was being raped. If this story continues, will that ever be cleared up? Just a thought. Bravo.
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May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it\'s me again, and so soon, but I just realized that in my haste to read this story I completely overlooked the fact that there were four chapters and not one. So some of the things I said in my first review might not fit with what happens in the continuing chapters. Just ignore what doesn\'t fit, if you please.