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for Kingdom Come

by PeachDancer82

person Minerva
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* That was lovely!! I can\'t wait for more. Looks to be a very interesting story you have going!! I can\'t wait to see how Draco and Harry actually get together. I love the details you went into on this fic as far as background on Harry that was simply wonderful and very informative!! You\'re doing a great job keep up the great work!!

~~Minnie
person Lakoma
schedule June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I only have one TEENY request. Could you type so that it fits into the screen??? Scrolling down isn\'t so bad \'cause you have to do that to read any story, but scrolling from side to side gives me a headache. Other than that--keep writing! It\'s good and I look forward to your updates. I can\'t wait to see how you get Draco and Harry together.
person S. Wing
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cute....a new play one an old idea...nice....continue...
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not too back, I like it. I\'d like to see more though.. hehehe. Keep up the good work!! ~~Minerva
person Lakoma
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A good start to what looks like a good story. I like the way you explained what would be going on. You have some spelling errors, but they\'re not too bad. I look forward to reading the next chapter when it comes up. Hope it\'s soon.
person Nick Dipalma hater
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t understand that at all!
person Wanita
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it
write some more chapters quick
later
person arcee
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I like the Royal thing ..
person asaroth69
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I\'ve already reviewed your fic on ff.net, go and check it if you haven\'t!^-^
I\'m just dropping by to be my nosy self, please don\'t be offended, I had forgotten to ask you my question before hitting the send button on ff.net, imagine my despair, but oh joy you\'re on aff.net and....I am babbling, am I ?....sorry... ;.;...
anyway I\'m a student in linguistics and always enjoy studying things out of fics, allies work and pleasure^-^ and I\'ve been intrigued by your spelling of \"chao\", could you tell me please what nationality you are? This time I could get any clues by your writing though this peculiar word makes me think of french for some reason...don\'t feel bound to answer me, if you want to keep it a secret: just ignore me, I won\'t feel offended!
love your fic write some more!
person Pandorasag o
schedule December 21, 1919 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Pretty Pretty Please update this story I love it so far. Especally how each chapter goes is either Harry or Draco\'s POV and I love the background info of the veela. I can tell That you have put a lot of effort into this story so please finish it. I wait on baited breath for more.