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for Kingdom Come

by PeachDancer82

person TigerBlak
schedule September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank god!!! Finally, an update. I\'ve been waiting for this fic for so long. I finally had to save o myo my favorites list so that I wouldn\'t have to go all the way through AFF.net to get to it. Just click and there it is!! I love instant gratification. Now even better would be the next chapter.

Laterz
person Nabiki
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When will Draco and Harry find out about their relationship to be? and when are you going write another chapter.
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good
person TigerBlak
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was another great chapter, but I must comment that you need a beta reader or at least a really good review of the chapter. There are a few words that are the wrong word for what you are trying to say for example.commcommits\' when you mean \'comments\' its a simple grammar issue that doesn\'t take away from the story but if fixed would go a long way in making the story a su rea rea
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Laterz
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this is great!!!!!!!!!
person Aryah
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
B.U.L.L.\'s c sta stand for

B-eautifully
U-nappreciated
L-egal
L-itigators

Cause let face is they are... Heh heh heh

But that\'s just a thought on the matter. I like where this is going it seems really cool.

Love and peace,
Aryah
person Quazimodo
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Draco\'s part is all very confusing and I don\'t think I really get but it sounds really cool! lolz! All I\'m really waiting for is for Harry and Draco to actually see eachother again!!!! When\'s school gunna start dude???!!!! I really like all the not starting out so fast and taking its time but it won\'t even start without them meeting yet!!!! and I really really ly wly wanna know all school\'s reaction oooooohhhh this is gunns be good....if it even ever gets to that part!!!! so...UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON PPLLLLZZZZZ!!!!!!
person Akurei
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like the new take on the veela Draco idea.
person babychan
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I can tell you put a lot of thought in this. Creating a language is HARD! And also I am honored that I could help inspire you a little ^_~ Thanks for the props, but even I can tell that this story is all yours even with the similarites. ^_~ Keep up the good work. I\'ll be reading.
person TigerBlak
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely wonder Yo You have to update soon. I can\'t wait to see what you do with the whole Veela inheritance and attraction information. I\'ve been reading Frizzy\'s story (just like everyone else in HP fandom) and you\'ve taken a great stab at the premise and it looks like yours will be one for the books as well. Drop me an email when you update.

Laterz