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by Darknight

person MAINbase23
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAUV!! now THAT was a pairing that made my jaw hit the floor, i just HAD to read it and i did....and loved it! it was very very VERY well written!!!! please do this pairing again in another setting or situation :D
person ravenclawboy203
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!
person Red Writing Hood
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
okay...this one was a bit odd to start out with, but it did end up very sweet. Very good job. I enjoyed it.

RWH
person Lady Feylene
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry. This isn\'t a flame, it\'s me being honest. The plot was wholly unbelievable. The grammer was rather lacking, and the wording was inconsistant and choppy. Pushing the envelope is all well and good, but it takes a certain angle to do so. I think you really need to find the angle for this story.
person Nick Dipalma hater
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! I used parts of your story to write mine is that OK? Sorry, but it was reall ygood and I was having trouble writin\'
mine. I felt it this story is very helpful to other people trying to write stories. I needed your fic to write one chappie to my story and this is my first time writing a fic. i think you should feel a bit honored and glad your fic is very good!








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