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for The prince and his slave

by jessi15

person fxxyldy
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty awesome. but u need to write more. cliffhanger endings never are good. for anything. do a sequel, anything, dont care.
person Jayme
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I quite liked that! I always LOVE seeing Drac the the dominant/master position...it fits him...so very well...yum.
person nicola
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think you could do a lot of fun things with this story. please write more.
person Sing
schedule May 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rarely have I ever felt as strongly about a fic as I do about this one. But I felt that I simply must say something... just stop writing right now. Normally, I\'m quite a bit more diplomatic, but you\'ve subjected me to mental torture. I don\'t care if you are 11 (as Ipectpect) or 111, just stop. Put us out of our misery. You obviously have never had sex, and you don\'t know what the hell you are doing. The g-spot is actually *inside* of your body. It isn\'t on the outside. And that 14 inch dildo? I\'m sorry, but Catherine The Great would have a problem with that one. This is utter rubbish.

Cheers,
Sing
person BumbleB9876
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw some story but I dont understand the first chappie, was that Draco and Ginny? How did draco become a prince? Why did Ginny look for work in the same place her father got fired- why was Arthur working for Lucios? Are you getting tired? It is asomesome story though Please continue! Much love, Peace out!
person darkangel
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really good, but why does Ginny\'s personality change so much in the second chapter?
person Nick Dipalma hater
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What? I can only give you critisism? But I loved your first chappie! Wellllllll, WRITE SOME MORE!!!!!
person Nick Dipalma hater
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More chappies! I WANT MORE!!!! MORE I TELL YOU! MORE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE your fic!!!!!!!!! MORE !!!!!! Still more!










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