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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see this "sneak peak" at this time these two had a chance to enjoy before being separated. I think you could probably write another story about what Remus did when he found out that Sirius was supposedly the traitor, and then have this one be just about the meeting between the two, but it works well the way it is, too. The interaction between the two is nice. I think you probably could've ended the story sooner, though. The story seems to end after Remus wakes up. Most of the last six or seven paragraphs seems to be Remus telling us things that we can tell from the earlier interactions between him and Sirius.