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by DarkLoveZorg

schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't know how I manage to keep getting myself totally into stories that were never finished sighs. But never the less this is absolutly a great work. by the way its never to late to update or finish this master piece!!!!
person Brittin
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Are you going to finish it? I can't wait to see what happens. Please update!!!!
person Gaps of Misery
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is is the first time ever that I feel sorry for Narcissa and don't think it's weird. Couldn't there be a chance of another threeseome in the future? They don't need to love each other, but they could have fun, and well, you wrote that chapter so greatly that I really wonder what else is up your sleeve. Besides, smut has never been hotter! ;)
person Mistress Vamp
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the first chapters at ff.net, but found it here. I have to admit I feel kinda bad for Narcissa, but hopefully, the baby was conceived and once the baby is born, she can find someone *or someone's* that she can be happy with. Please update again, soon!! ::MV::
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a wonderful style and put so many honest emotions in it that it's really touching. Wow! Besides, perfect name choice for Lucius' parents... and that line "he found himself face to face with Medusa herself - or the next best thing, Narcissa Black" was just one of the best I've ever read! I can't stand Narcissa, that's why I love this story... *lol*
person trustingfrndshp
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope Lucius isn't one step behind forever; I'd like to see him try to resolve things with Severus; look forward to more:-)