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for Patented Daydream Charms

by Padfoot

person mona
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say this is fantastic! i love how you twist in what really happened in book six. and you are pulling it off rather well. good job! i loved the daydream it was hot! please update soon! this is so great!
person lxj
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omgoodness! that is like seriously one of the best stories i have ever read! one of the main reasons being that it can actually be believable! i hate draco/hermione stories where they just suddenly fall in love with eachother which i know won't happen so the characters are very OOC, but gosh, this plot is so believable! well at least the part of hermione seeing draco in a different way. what a very imaginative but very convincable way for her to start liking him! wow i simply am amazed at this story as you can see. BRAVO! you have done an INCREDIBLE JOB! i look forward to your update (:
person angel
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you have other chapters coming! This story is great and very well written I cannot wait to finish reading the story.
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting . . . I love the fact that Draco is continually in her daydreams, and yet she doesn't know why and can't control it . . . I'm curious to find out why this is . . .
Anyway - keep up the great work . . . and more soon please! 8~D
~ptc~
person lemonade
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your take on Hermione's inner musings on the cannon issues. Who better to get Ron back for his thickheadedness than Malfoy, the very rich, insulting, bane of Ron's existence. Can't wait for an update.
person Erin
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting and good. I love this story, it's one of my favorites. Is Hermione and Draco going to have anything happen to them together or is Hermione just going to have day dreams of him?
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story lines. And thank Merlin for Patented Day Dream Charms. LOL I look forward to more. :)
person mona
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really really like this nice job! please update soon!
person Erin
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Very original idea you have. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I can't wait to read the next one.
person Luthien
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whow,
I love it! Please, please keep updating soon...
It was really weird reading the German parts in the second chapter! I'm a bilingual in German and English and it's really strange reading something you understand but knowing it shouldn't be written the way it is. He he! Dunno if you get my point, but nice plot! Can't wait for the next day dream!

Cheers,
Luthien