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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Believe me when I say you were not the only person to think that when reading the Half Blood Prince. Update soon, I love this fic! Aww, poor Mione.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read this before, was wondering if you were changing anything (the ending) or if this was a repost. Don't want to read through this again esepecially certain parts/part.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is wonderful. Is it just me or do I sense a sort of double meaning in the dreams. The one about the nurse and enemy soldier for sure, there's definitely some themes in there similar to the basic D/Her ship, enemies and not being to understand each other. It's interesting.
Please continue, I look forward to the next installation.
Please continue, I look forward to the next installation.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Draco will realise that Hermione was there?? Hopefully we'll find out soon. :)
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that you have progressed to more "real life" action and less of them daydreaming. I was skimming the daydreams before..this really is a great idea for a story and you have done really well with it..but daydream sequences can get pretty boring fast.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapters there . . . very yummy . . .
I looked at the picture of the Baby Bug . . . *laughs* Cute . . .
Anyway - keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
~ptc~
I looked at the picture of the Baby Bug . . . *laughs* Cute . . .
Anyway - keep up the great work, and more soon please! 8~D
~ptc~
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im in love. absolutley amazing. very good writing as well.
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read nothing that could be considered disappointing, if anything, Hermione's first time with her 'toy' sounded quite realistic and I love the idea of Draco not being as experienced as his perceived reputation and now he and Hermione have 'noticed' eachother - can't wait to see where this goes. :)
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been a huge fan of yours since the beginning, but the funniest paragragh in any fic I've ever read has caused me to finally write a review. "Then he did something so ingeniouse hermione believed he really was a god, for no human man could ever come up with this . . . would be forced to do 2 whole things . . . ". Unfortunately, you and I must have had some of the same lovers, because boy can I relate to that thought! Keep writing, I need you!
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful twist. At first I thought finally, Hermione is going to be the dominant one in her fantasy but when I read it was Draco's, well I loved it. I look forward to much more. :)