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for Patented Daydream Charms

by Padfoot

person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending...as I did the story, fantastic, and so original.
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well maybe not gouge your eyes out but I for one certainly wanted to read more. Having said that, I understand that a story must end somewhere and it's no easy decision at times to keep something going or find a decent place to stop. At any rate, I enjoyed this and I hope you'll write something else. :)
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please, oh, please, oh please . . . tell me there's going to be some sort of sequel where he figures out how he feels about her . . . and things get worked out and they end up together . . . cause this was seriously an ODD (and possibly wrong) place to end this story . . .
MORE PLEASE! 8~D
~ptc~
person lemonade
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love how you put this in canon. I kept waiting for the big diversion of fate, but you did it! Good job, liked what you did, it was interesting.
person mona
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i thought the same thing with harry and ginny!!( i love them together) i love that there are so many chapters up. I love this sooooo much! every chapter i love it more... but when are they going to get with 'it'! lol no it's alright to take you time with 'it'. So now draco is going realize that it was hermione who sent the charm to him. i wonder how that will go. i bet he wonders if she has used one and it is him that is her lover in them and if he'll mess with her more knowing and not being able to resist certain things and urges. i really love how you blend the story so well with book six! i honestly think this is the best one i've read that goes right along with the sixth book, and make sense. it is building nicely, very nicely. you know before i stumbled onto the harry potter fan fiction sites i never really thought hermione with anyone other than ron (i do like them together but not as much as with draco though), but when the first story i read was a Dramione story i was like "this sooo makes sense!" look back to everything that has been going on with hermione and draco. the things he says and does. the things she says and does. it makes you wonder if jk rowling is going to pull a fast one and put those two together at the end. with her saying "i put hints in there". well anyway i am looking very forward to another chapter and looking forward to their first 'encounter' together, i hope there is. the heat is building so wonderfully i almost can't take it myself. lol update soon! (wouldn't it be interesting if they both had the same daydream about 'them' not being other people but being them. that would freak them both out and who knows perhaps what takes it to that next level) :)
person mona
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
carabella,

i was wondering the same thing but i think that this story could go right along with the book, with draco running off at the end with snape and for draco and hermione to still end up together. it would be very interesting to see how the writer does it, but from everything else i have read in this story i am sure the writter will do it brilliantly. don't you think? i am very interested to see if this story goes futher than the end of sixth year and if they will indeed be together. i hope it does. ;)

person tabitoo
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha, Harry's happy hour indeed. GREAT PLOT!!! Love the way you're making this fit with the book. Makes it seem more real.
person anjellic
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa...I can't wait to find out what happens next! Really enjoying the story on this end! Thanks for your writting so far! :O)
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so waiting for that last line the moment Hermione made her exiting statement. I'm sure Draco will figure it out soon enough. Loved the Harry/Ginny moment and I loved the emotions that Hermione felt after witnessing it. Well written. More please. :)
person carabella
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i luv the story, but i have a question, is this gonna be completely HBP compatible, or will they manage to actually get together?

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