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for Patented Daydream Charms

by Padfoot

person Anon
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's awesome that it goes along with HBP so well. Good story.
person CiraArana
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Really great idea to have Hermione day-dreaming. I held my breath throughout the dream and couldn't stop grinning after she had woken from it. This first chapter was highly entertaining. I'll go and read the others as well.

However, before I do so, let me just say one more thing: thank you, thank you so much for your well-written fanfic. It's so nice to read a fic where the author knows about the meaning of orthography and correct grammar. There are so many sadly lacking this feat.

Okay, excuse me know. I have a fic to read. ^-^

Cira
person CiraArana
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Das war ein echt hei
person mona
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well done!! i loved it. i wish they could have ended up together, perhaps if you feel inspired enough you might take us into what would be hermione and draco's point of veiw during the 7 book. that would be a really nice read. you are one of my fave authors on here, love your stuff. hope there is more to this story but do know it was a great read it is hard to capture them right and you do it. thanks!!
person tabitoo
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Hope to read more of your work in the future.
person Regina Malfoy
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story because alot of people dismiss that HBP happend... but you were like right in there with it! I love that; it was definatly satisfying. Ive read a fair few of your stories and I love your writing. Keep it up and I will gladly keep reading. I remember reading Why Draco Should Not Be Using Tampons... it was basically the first Draco/Hermione fanfiction I ever read. So thank you for being an author and thank you for being there for me.
Looking forward to more,
Regina
person Julie
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Way to ruin a story with a crappy ending. This was such a dissapointment. I wish I could have the time back that I spent reading this fic but I can't. Best I could do is leave this review.
person somegirl
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, normally I would not review for stories. But I jsut had to for this one.

I am a big fan of yours. I really am, but this story just dissappointed me. It lacked a lot of zest, it was just a bunch of sex stories stringed together and that got old really fast. It wasn't fun, it wasn't kinky, and I didn't laugh like I did with your other stories. Did something happen?

Best wishes to your next story.
person firewall
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I liked the twist at the end. Even Hermione needs a chance to be shallow and superficial. VBG
person sandrosnarky
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a wonderful, perfect ending! I love it how Hermione found her place with Ron and Draco figured things out to some degree. The idea behind the Daydream Charms was excellent as well.

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