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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor blind hermeione..it's Draco you want.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Draco in this -- he's tired, withdrawn, preoccupied and overwrought with emotions he won't give validity too. Throw in those Charms and Hermione and what a show. And Hermione just made a huge OOPS! I love how you opened Draco's eyes about others after seeing Hermione cry --
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, I like how real you made it -- that is a first time experience.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow - a very deep story actually. very good. I do despiser Ron though - he's such a git and so doesn't deserved Hermione. I liked it - too bad they didn't end up together but you kept it canon so well.
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September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know this story was written a long time ago, and I doubt that you'll see this review, but I have to leave it anyway. This is probably my favorite story on this website. You are a terrific writer; very funny, as well as able to capture emotions and thoughts very well. I loved the ending, as well as the moral of the story: it was bittersweet, and realistic. I think everyone goes through the realization that feeling wanted, and sexy isn't what defines a person, and that you must learn to like yourself for other reasons, and you summed that up very well. So, anyway, thank you for your story. =p
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I really like the ending--their thoughts on each other and Hermione noticing Ron.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do really want to claw your eyes out for the ending... but you leave everything nice and wide open for a sequel when they get together after the war and you don't even have to do much in the way of exposition because this story is here.... I'm pleading with you! You can't just leave it at this????? Oh god, would someone please KILL RON????
P.S. I love your writing style and all, you are an excellent story-teller!!!!
P.S. I love your writing style and all, you are an excellent story-teller!!!!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JK Rowling would be proud at how well you followed the storyline. you misplace anything! I absolutely adore your writing.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha i loved the story it made me laugh at the end..hahaha i thought that it was funny because the entire time i was reading the stoty i never thought that it was going to end like that. yay! a twist
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
absolutely brilliant.