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for The Veela\'s Mate

by LeoZodiac

person beauty7890102
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah great chapter.
person beauty7890102
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah great chapter can
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this Are you still writing it by chance or do you have more on another site
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like it please continue
person Inui's Bastard Love Child
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YARGHH!!! Quick put the next chapter on... NEXT CHAPTER!
person Madz
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this fic is great. i love it. please keep writing it.
person anon
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am a bit confused in the first chapter you stated that all veela at girls and then Lucius shows up and is a veela? Might want to explain that a bit as to why Harry turned into a girl when there are male veela... couldn\'t Harry have stayed male. Anyway like the story update soon this is very interesting I can\'t wait to see how Harry/Jade deals with all the new \"female stuff\"
person DrarrSev
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, though I do have a few questions. Why was there any doubt that Harry had found her mate since you stated she had to find her mate within the first 24 hours our she would go insane... it has been several weeks... and how could Lucius be a dominate mail veela when you stated in ch1 that all veelas were women?

Other than that I like it alot and sincerely hope that you will post again soon.
person PJ
schedule March 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So who came up with that stupid law? It had to be Fudge because he doesn\'t like Harry. I know Harry is a bit upset about his friends getting the fame for killing you-know-who when they didn\'t really kill him... but then again Harry didn\'t really like the fame so maybe it is better this way. the poor guy turned into a girl well at least it was a good looking girl and a \"magical\" one at that so he got something out of it. Glad to see Sirius is back both Harry & Moony deserve to be happy. Loved how they got around that stupid law they was very Slytherin of them LOL And since when does the minister provide a mate for a magical creature they should get to pick their own like Remy did and other veela\'s. Is Fudge going to provide mates for all the veela\'s now or was that law even real? Or was that law only for potions accidents? That potion was outlawed so it would not be something that happened alot. Sorry so many quesitons I am sure they will get answered as you write the story this is great and it is a new one too. Thx for posting