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for Amber

by Marvinroom

person Angela
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great story....i cant wait to read more!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that, to me, was the perfect ending scene. Now i want to read more. I hope you update soon
person Jessica
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. The "Dragon" and "Princes"s nicknames seem linda cheesy though. lol :p
person Ciantara
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
More please!!!
person 2bfoundwanting
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. I really like it. I love your characterization of Draco, tho their personalities are a bit AU. I really truly cant wait to see where this is going, and i cant wait for you to update! My only criticsm is that i dont like Hermione calling him Dragon, it seems really cheesy. Princess is okay, beacuse it seems like something he would say. But the Dragon really bothers me.

But far be it from me to tell you how to write your story! : ) REALLY good
person apple_blossum
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start..cant wait to read more keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh this is great you have my attention! i cant wait for other chapters!
person Juls
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was a mad first chapter!! it was fantastic!! i can;t wait to read more!! u have 2 update soon!!!!!
person Kelsie
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! I like it!
person dark_samira
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far and I feel that I'll like it even more later
so keep going!