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for Amber

by Marvinroom

person Anon
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far, but i'm not too fond of the pet names. Granted there are lots of fics going in this direction...her insecurties of her self image...but still pretty well written...keep it up.
person Amanda
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just getting into that. Please resume, don't stop
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Delightful!
person Elmo
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story its very very cute XD very similar to another fic that i love...uh..verification? or something like that? XD but very very cute and i absolutely loved it....bit hesitant about the Dragon thing....Princess is a cute thing to call her but...not so sre about the Dragon part...its a bit..cheesy...

hmm but i want more!!! XP if its a one shot...I WANT MORE!! hehe if there's going to be more thank you XD
person Demon
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please tell me your planning on wrighting more, at first i wasnt to intrested in the plot but then you managed to catch my intrest well done =) plese continue with it
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like this! I hope you finish it! I really want to read more.
person monica
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. i like it!!! please do say that's not the end and u will write more. it sounds like it has a great story line going for it!!!
person kbluesmom
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By all that is decent and good in this world please I'm begging you update soon! I am already hooked after one chapter! Great going!! (stands and applauds!)
person dan
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the story , but it ended kinda ubruply - I cant wait for the next part!
person slykitten
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, I'm liking so far. Looking forward to the next part!