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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi guys!! I am so happy I am almost giddy. I never thought soo many people would take the time to read my story, let alone review it. Unfortunatley though, the next chapter will be coming tomorrow because i need to go to work tomorrow, meanign i need some sleep. lol.
JW- Intersting questions. Thanks! I will try to address them with a legitimate answer in the next chapter!
JW- Intersting questions. Thanks! I will try to address them with a legitimate answer in the next chapter!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... I think we all know what the plan is. Unless, of course, you're going to surprise us with some amazing twist (*cough*thatwouldbegreat*cough*). Well, I'm liking this as of right now. I'd like to see how you're going to have this turn out. I'd enjoy it about 20 times more if you would make Severus dark in this fic.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has a real good start. I would definitely like to read more.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I think Snape should be more intelligent in his remarks towards Granger. I mean, yes, she is known as a know-it-all, but he wouldn't use it like that. It sound inane, foolish, idiotic, stupid, asinine ... which ever phrase you prefer. However, this is indeed an interesting topic you are dealing with in this fic. I take it that this is loosely based off of the marriage law challenge? Or you at least got your inspiration from it? Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest. Keep up the good *cough* mediocre *cough* work because I WILL be reading the rest of this.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Keep up the good work.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. Look forward to reading more.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like the first chapter that much, I thought the writing was soemwhat forced. And I was almost sure you would have severus petition for Hermione, but I am glad that the second chapter is different. It's interesting now, and I dont believe I read anything like it before.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - ah, so only Death Eater families will be petitioning... Poor Severus, having to be a female at the Malfoys' house - he could be killed, raped, beaten... and he has to act like Hermione. So Severus has to spend time with Hermione, to learn her mannerisms? What about her parents - what will they be told about her whereabouts? Will the real Hermione be in hiding? What will happen when Severus has to be Severus? Can't wait to see the next chapters!!