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for Freedom to Choose

by tavia

person Dark!Vultrix
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love the way you went about this... nice plot! Please post more soon... this is how HBP should have been!
person Alison
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great story! I think this (so far) should be the actual end of HBP! It's so much happier and funnier. =o) Update soon please.
person Kitten
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. It is so close to HBP. I can't wait for more chapters. Plz Update soon.
person tarantella
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked what you've written so far. The plot is great (oh, how we all wanted HPB to end exactly this way!) and the writing is good either. Please, continue - frequent and lengthy updates would be best! :)
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 3! Draco is calling Harry his in his mind? Already? Hmmm.
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uhm....You see the thing is.....I totally love it and am looking forward to your next installment......I almost died when I came to the end....Please don't keep us waiting too long.....Waiting and anticipating.
person jw
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story i hope you update soon
person Quichi
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, I'm eager to read more. Your choice to have both boys go torment to Dursleys is interesting, I'd like to see where you take that. And to see what they do to them, lol.
person Aphasia
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story.. can\'t wait to read more!!