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person sapphirexkat2
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What an amazing multi-chapter story! The idea was nice and original, especially the potion and stuff. After HBP it just seemed natural that these two had something for each other. heehee. I enjoyed this story very much! I hope you write another long story with some juicy Snarry.
person Gravy Baby
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can only think of one word to describe this.......WOW! Love it love it love it love it!!!!!! ^_^
person sefty
schedule March 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
harry shud make him beg for it :P
person Jamee43
schedule March 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you gonna udate real soon right? cuz I can\'t wait, it\'s a great story!!
person Jill
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and a very original fanfic. I am enjoying it so far and i hope that you will continue to update frequently.
person Ayden
schedule March 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, this story is really interesting one :) I hope Snape and harry can finally do sumthing naughty ;P The idea is nice and blaa blaa blaa and hope to see an update soon :)
person Anon
schedule March 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More!
person DrarrySev
schedule March 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your story needs a bit more angst. I simply cannot see Harry giving in too easily. Even if deeeeeeep down he fancied Snape alot, Snape has done many many mean things to Harry upto and including the fact that he did say he\'d rather be dead than be connected to Harry.

I think that Snape should lose it abit and say/do something that once again deeply hurts harry. Harry should leave and go off on his own. I mean his relatives were not able to love him and the man whose life he saved was obviously less than happy so he should isolate himself in an effort to not be a burden to anyone. It should take Snape going to him that finally snaps him out of it. That\'s just my opinion, but there you go!
person Amarilis
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter! I like the fact that the potion does not seem to have a dramatically strong effect on Harry yet, he did not throw up or enything when he touched Ginny. I would really like to see how it will develop so keep writing. And I am also interested in seing Snapes reactions. Well done
person jenni933
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
moi aussi je veut la suite^^ elle est vraiment bien ton histoire