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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finished your story (through chapter 24)..... It was a great story so far.... I would love to read it through to the finish. Excellent to this point....... Mae
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your Delibro curse. JKR seems to think stunning someone is a big deal.
The last time I tried to leave a review a notice popped up saying I was only allowed to leave one review a day. In case that's true, well, I can understand why there are so few reviews for you. Of course it could be a curse levied solely on me.
That said, I still am enjoying your work a great deal.
The last time I tried to leave a review a notice popped up saying I was only allowed to leave one review a day. In case that's true, well, I can understand why there are so few reviews for you. Of course it could be a curse levied solely on me.
That said, I still am enjoying your work a great deal.
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"...so secret, even YOU are not allowed to know about it."
This scene is perfect. What a place to end the story.
This scene is perfect. What a place to end the story.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No other author makes me look up as many new words as you do. "Arquebuses", is just an example. I'm trying to remember all of them for my next Scrabble game. Not that I could ever use arquebuses. Ha!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"dodecahedron"
You really come up with the best shapes, er... stuff.
It takes me longer to read and learn about the things you mention than it takes to read the chapters. It's great.
You really come up with the best shapes, er... stuff.
It takes me longer to read and learn about the things you mention than it takes to read the chapters. It's great.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Other than telling you that I'm enjoying your story I'm not too good at reviews.
I don't see any typos, (I'm probably not as eagle eyed as some though. lol)
I don't see any typos, (I'm probably not as eagle eyed as some though. lol)
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your idea of Luna writing to Albus and just saying Stubby was inocent and telling him about Wormtale was great. I can't tell you how many stories I've read where it takes Harry 3 chapters and and a lot of intrigue to get Padfoot out.
Thank you for sharing your talent and hard work.
Thank you for sharing your talent and hard work.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would Have To say this is your best Fic - But I feel you rushed it too much. Or Is that just me wanting more?
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great cant wait for more from any story lookin to the future