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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and think it is a very good idea. I hope that you write more of it.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your story has promise. I can't wait to see how this new Harry is going to act, and how the wizarding world is going to react. I have noticed a few spelling mistakes, but they really don't distract from the story. Please continue!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story update soon
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, indeed. And Tom the barkeep knew of this Library? Sixty years is a long time. Certainly Dumbledore was much older than that, but that would leave out most of the usual suspects. Tom, Lucius and Severus, for example. I'd be interested in seeing where you're going with this.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks like this will be a dark Harry story. So far, it's an interesting premis. I do wonder why Dumbledore felt the need to imprision Harry; did he know he was a horcrux?
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. What happens next?
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cool idea, and so far from what can see of the writing, it matches with the idea. Basically meaning good idea and good writing. I hope that you do plan to continue this story because it would be a shame for you not to. Do you have any pairings in mind, or is the story not going to have any romance? I usually only read slash stories but I'd think I'd still read this one even if it was het because I really find it to be truly good. Update soon please:)
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seems like a very good start, be careful to make it take a while before harry becomes super strong
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please no slash
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've definately gotten my attention and i want to read more.
Keep up the good work and UPDATE soon!
Keep up the good work and UPDATE soon!