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for Mind Trap

by serpentlady

person Shady
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving it so far, can't wait to see what Harry gets up to.
person Night Shade
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thisss isss turning out to be an awsssome ssstory, pleassse continue.
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can you explain please, pregnant with squid? and a hint, very few people use the word luncheon, they usually abreviate it to lunch, especiallymin speech.

Good story by the way
person LuciusDrache
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do like where this plot could be headed, i has been a good read for the first 2 chapters i do hope you will contine.
person Treck
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well. You are off to a good start. I hope you update regularly.
person Narcissa Black
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still excellent, and now he has a willing dark shadow to do his bidding. We await.
person Random Individual
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story you\'ve started here. Keep up the good work!
person PJ
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds very interesting I like the idea of the library. Please continue this story
person FlameFlameYeah
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems to be starting out to be a super harry story, but of a style I haven't seen very often, of a darker Harry Potter. I would like to see more of your writing, as long as this story isn't complete slash. Harry turning dark I could understand, but not completely dumping Ron or Hermione.
person Night Shade
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thisss isss an interesssting concept, I'm really interesssted in it ssso pleassse continue.

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