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for To Dare

by TajaReyul

person pwlib
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am enthralled by this story- there is excellent character development and a complex plot line. I look forward to the entire tale.
person pyrostarglow
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Oh thanks be to you Taja! I can't wait to find out what her secret is? I mean she brewed potions for St. Mungos for the war but why is she so paranoid? And who broke in? And why did they have to kill Ian? And why can't Hogwarts brew thier own potions?
I simply can't wait to read more! Thank You for writing!
person luna26
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh, a twins tale, they are far and few between and this is a great start. Keep up the great work, i look forward to more chapters
person pyro
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful wonderful wonderful
So hope there's another chapter soon!
Pretty please?
person EL
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that you finished this story!!! I got to the end of chapter 2 and nothing!!!! This was very, very GOOD!!!
person Ally
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like it'll be a great story, please continue it ASAP. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!:)
person Samayel
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey the labourious editing work really shows! Nice, crisp and direct, also better grammar and less of an inclination toward run on sentences than yours truly! An interesting beginning with an new character....hard to draw people at first when starting with an unknown quantity. Trust that I'll be wathcing intently to see where this goes! Love M.