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for The Return

by RDWind

person MarzBar
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy to see that some of the children have been rescued and are recovering. I still do not understand WTF is the deal with Rowan? She did so much for everybody yet she is judged so harshly. More story please.
person angel
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ..please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person MarzBar
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still in the same quagmire. How did they think it was a dream? When were the really bad things done to her?
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great
person l'etje
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very very good keep going and post sooon
bye bye
person Carol
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fun, I liked the mystery behind who Madison's Father is? Though I do have one question what ever happened to the child that Rowan had conceived with Remus and Servus?
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this wa a big surprise but i still think that rowan and sirius must be toghter and even maybey with remus
keep going and please calm the kids
keep going and post soon
bye bye
person MarzBar
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I was afraid that was going to happen when the cousin thing came up. Who is Madison's father and if it's not Sirius, why does she think she should be so mad at Rowan for not bringing Sirius back earlier? I smell serious (pun intended) angst ahead. More story please.
person Eliza
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, a sequel, and I'm intrigued already. Can't wait for the next chapter already.
person Carol
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say that when I started to read the chosen a few weeks ago, I was a bit wary after reading the first chapter but something in me just told me to continue. I must say that I am glad that I did. I really enjoy your writting style. I hope that you continue this story, I believe that you have something here that will be great.

In Peace