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In the last couple of days i have read both stories they were great thank you for your time

I have read both of the stories of Rowan & the HP gang. At the end of "The Return I was crying. This story was so well written and was beautifly moving. I know that was sappy but I am still a little emotional at this time. I was thinking with the 41st chapter that there might be another sequel but with that last chapter it is obvious that there wont be and that is perfectly fine. You are a wonderful writer and I have greatly enjoyed reading your work. :) Keep it up.

awwww that ending made me want to cry!!!!!! I hate the fact that Harry and Ginny were the last to die!!! actually i think they all should have died togethre but hey your story. anyway it was really good took me a full 2 days to read both of them! I like what you did with Dobby though! Somthing i realized was that in the first story you made a whole big production about the boxes Harrys aunt gave him but we never found out what was in those boxes! call me anal but that bothered me to no end! i'll say it again though awsome story!!!!!!!

i'm sad its finished.. although it was a beautiful story. You have amazing talent. You could publish!! hehe, there's just the slight issue of using JK Rowling's (who is among my favorite fantasy authors!!) characters. It's been great reading this... distracts me a little from my exams (they finished this morning) so it was great to tie it all up.

Best of luck-- looking forward to other fictions by you, i love your style... and you had me running to a dictionary a couple times! (i love it!)

Spirit

why such a cliffhanger?!?!! AAAAHHH! great stuff though! i hope Rowan's not gonna die. even though she's completely psycho i really really like her and her part in this fic. and a baby, oh my gosh. wow. whose is it??!
you're amazing, just churning those chapters out!!

Spirit

*grinning like crazy because i was in your author's note* <-- that just never happened to me before. thanks!!
besides, i think its only natural for me to review, since i'm reading. also, i'm writing my own fic (haven't gotten it up on AFF yet) so i know that getting reviews is important and all. currently only a select few have seen my writing. however, with the amout of schoolwork i have, i have no idea when i'll be able to upload any of it. i've got the account (my pen name is FallenAngel) but there's nothing up yet. oh well, it'll be up eventually.
painting.. i like painting! anyway, its true, breaks are needed. :)

Spirit

*pouts* for no good reason the review thing didn't post my whole review. anyway, i wrote that i know its important to get reviews on fic's because i'm writing one myself... well, i'm writing the sequel. Haven't found the time yet to upload it (my pen name is FallenAngel) and i'm unfortunately faced with a writer's block that shows no sign of going away.
painting... i love painting!! although i agree, you do need breaks once in a while... :)

Spirit

amazing. so is the title referring to Rowan's return? or to something else's return we don't know about yet? --don't answer!! i'll find out eventually.

so far, my fic only has 11 of the 27 chapters up. its called "Ancient Powers Part 1 (working title)". i still have no idea what to call it, although 'Ancient Powers' is better than my first working title (swimming is cleansing) which had close to nothing to do with the story.

looking forward to the next chapters!!

Spirit

you are amazing. four chapters in a day?! wow. i'm really impressed. and your writing is so good. there is so much more of a story in this fic and The Chosen than in other fics i've read on this site. keep it up!!!

Spirit

PS. i can't remember if its in The Return or The Chosen, but someone (i think it was Steven Maples?) was described as 2 and a half meters tall which is equivalent to 6ft 4in. actually, 6ft 4in is 1 meter 93 (which is pretty tall! my boyfriend is 6ft 5in). just thought i'd point that out... 2 and a half meters would be about 8ft. ;)

already an amazing sequel, can't wait for the next chapters!!!!
i love it, keep it up! can't wait for the New Year's Eve party/weddings. it sounds like they're gonna rockkk!!

Spirit