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for Betraying Innocence

by sevsb1tch

person Persy
schedule June 21, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Good job!!!!

person Anon
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person zeezeelabouf
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
doesn\'t seem at all like hermione or snape.
person Lasciviousness
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was totally mad because it seemed like another glorified rape!! But then I got to the end and was like .. "OHHHH..."
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to be Hermione in that situation! (Fantisy with Snape!) It was brill!
person JW
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew, what a relief! I'm glad they both enjoyed this. Wonder what their next fantasies will be.... thanks for posting!
person Sylvyr
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoever said it was good is either stupid or taking pity on you. it was boring and way too short and they were too OOC for it to be really enjoyable.