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for A Vampires Heart

by emu

person momoko
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ nicely done. can't wait until the next chapter.
person momoko
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person jess
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sounds intresting, I'm gessing that it will be Lucious and Draco who change sides?
person Yana
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee hee poor harry and Sirius
person amanda
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon
person woof
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really need a Beta for grammar/spelling, the errors make it VERY hard to read this story.
person amanda
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon
person LadyVaughan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey it's me again. I really love your story. OK the only thing I don't see is herimone letting Sirius cry on her or rather him letting himself cry on her. He doesn't know her that well. I think that his best frieand Remus should have been the one he cryed on instead/ But that's just me. Please update soon. I can't wait for the rest. If you have a chapter ready please update tonight. There was a little misspell words here and there but other then that nothing I can think of. Wonderful Storyline. I love it. Please update soon.

~LadyVaughan
person sarah and tiff
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
we love it ........LOVE IT u mmmmm beta would be nice but not to shabby