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for Breaking Down Walls

by WitchatHeart77

person Sabrina
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great work. Please update soon.
person sheedy
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start!!! Update soon please.
person MrsSnape
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luv luv luv xxx
person snapegirl88
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic
it is great keep it coming.
kinda sad when severus did not finish what he
start.(tear)
loved it
keepit coming
person MistressBelladonna
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the way that you put humour into the serious aspects of the chapter. It was nice seeing that you have Severus feel guilty for being the one to take her virginity and equate it with her age, even though he knows that she is of age. A very fun chapter!