schedule
February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!!! The last chapter's crazy!!! Please continue!!!
schedule
February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO! Words cannot describe how hilarious that was!!! Please update soon. =o)
schedule
February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really impressed how you do not rush this, but are willing to spend an entire chapter on emotions and reactions. You do it so well, the phrasing and timing is pure poetry. Yours ideas are so unique. From the title and the intro you would believe that this is another "Harry is forced to marry.....", but it seems more like, "Ok, these four individuals are thrown together against their will", but instead of all the fighting and power struggles you'd expect, they form an amazing symbiotic relationship. I wish I could add something that could help you as a writer, but I cannot form a single critique. This may be an odd comparison, but snuggling into my favorite warm, fuzzy blanket on a cold day comes to mind. This piece is wonderful.
schedule
February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! Keep the updates coming please!!! =o)
schedule
February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, sweetie, just found this jem! Very original and engaging plot. Your Lucius is delicious!
schedule
February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first chappy was nothing short of sweet. The second was a little confusing. I'm not complaining!!!! I'm just reacting to a part that the 'queen of cliffie's' left me with. (Or is that the king?) How CAN Harry go from hating the marriage to admiring Lucius so much???? What did he 'learn' from the guards that could change his mind???? OOOOOOooooooooo tell us sooon!!!
schedule
February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is fantastic! Very nice idea, very interesting plot (and well written). I am putting your story on my "top list". Thanks!
schedule
February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally >< you post now chapter. Glad to read that's so fast 'cause I read this fic last night...You are very nice to post it too fast...Support you always...
schedule
February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. If you have a mailing list please add me in.
schedule
February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good set up so far. I wonder what the secret is as well. Isn't it just that Lucius is a battery - sucking up magical energy until it has to be discharged???? How the heck is he supposed to marry if he can't be touched???? I know you can get our hero's out of this one.