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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it because i dont think it has been done before. at this point in snarry fiction the same things are written about a thousand timea. so yes please go on and continue this because I would love to read the rest of it.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes the happy ending is all the sweeter when you start by putting the characters through the ringer. So this should be a damn good ending, heh. Good start, I'll definitly check back for more.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus, I am glad Harry is helping him try to recover.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!
Lot of angst. I keep thinking to the others prisoners too.
Ok, they can be bloody bastards and assassins and should pay, but the
Lot of angst. I keep thinking to the others prisoners too.
Ok, they can be bloody bastards and assassins and should pay, but the
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its wonderful. Dark, evil and Harry sounds as though he's swallowed Voldemort??
As per usual you have me intrigued and so once more I'll be strungling to follow your
story to try and figure out where you are going.
All those times in a hospital have you ever considered counselling??????
Best wishes,
As per usual you have me intrigued and so once more I'll be strungling to follow your
story to try and figure out where you are going.
All those times in a hospital have you ever considered counselling??????
Best wishes,
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is kind of hard to say wether you have gone to far or not. Depends on how you are going to continue I would say. I like your Harry. Adult, no longer pure Gryffindor but seeing grey and using his power / dark power. Right now I am looking forward to some explanations about how Harry and Snape came to an understanding, how your Lupin thinks, 'cause in most fics he is portrayed as the level headed open minded guy, supporting Harry in everything. Hope for more character study, perhaps some snape pov and conflicts between Ron/Harry, Lupin/Harry Herm
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOW THATS DISGUSTING! FUCK THERE SOOOO IS NO NEED FOR THAT!! TOES CUT OF AND NO NAILS YEUKK MY STOMACH IS CHURNING. APART FROM THAT YOUR STORY IS FANTASTIC!! REALLY GREAT HE SKELEGROW WILL GET HIS TOES BACK HE BETTER OR I WONT BE A HAPPY GIRL. AND MORE INFORMATION ON HOW HARRY AND SEVERUS BECAME FRIENDS AND WHAT HAPPENED TO GET HIM IN AZKABAN WOULD BE GREATLY APRECIATED!! PLEASE BYE
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Dramatic!!!!!
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for more!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I will always and forever love your stories!!! And this one has a new twist unlike your others! I'm wondering about somthing though, Tonk said "HER" kitchen and Lupin was actting like "HE" owns the house.....I thought HARRY owned that house? And if he doesn't than where does HE live!? O.o?? Is Severus going to get his toe-ies back?......ummm....PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!
~Miss War-chan ^_~
~Miss War-chan ^_~
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now, i am not usally a fan of dark fic's but this is a very ineresting and dare I say original plot. I am curious to know what exactly is wrong with Harry and what Sev can do about it. I hope you continue with it.