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for Jail Bird Choir

by harriet

person cdkobasiuk
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the twisted angst.

cdk
person Barbara
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist. Draco is Severus's son. Looking forward to the next update.
person Barbara
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Better and better with every update.
person War-chan
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O Yummy!!!!!!!! Malfoy Sr. & Jr. are always so odd....and now I know why!!!!!! Harry's just getting darker and darker, which to me is meaning that this story is getting greater and greater!!!!!! (though how THAT'S possble I have no idea seeing as this was ALREADY such a wonderful and *I personaly think* one of your best so far!) Oh! and OOooo Harry's going to be SO pissed if he finds out what that lil'shit Draco's done!!! Touching HIS Sevie!!! The nerve!!! I'm LOVEING the sub!Sev thing (which I know you know!) and all I can really say is THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! I just LOVE sub!Snape!!!!!!! And really I can't wait till Malfoy Sr. gets into the picture, his never played a big part before from what I've seen in your stories so I'm wondering if this time will be different (not that I care much for him, I'm just wanting to see the outcome...) I'll be waiting eagerly for your Update!!!! ^_^

~Miss War-chan
=has been made very happy!!! Yummy....uke!Severus Sanpe....and with blood too *licks lips*
person Chys
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this one ok so far, but where's the rest of the other one?

Thicker than Water? I was really enjoying the intriguing beginning to that one, would have loved to see how things developed. I would have reviewed sooner but I haven't been able to respond much lately, wanted to tell you that I loved how it was going. (I only managed to read up to chapter 5 and if there was more, I would love to read it!) Couldn't you repost it, even if you don't intend to finish it? Is there somewhere else where it's posted completely if there is more?

:drooling over good ficcage:
person antipyro
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the little bit 'o smut, it was sorta a nice 'touch'.

Love the work and keep the updates coming.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this story alot. Can't wait for more.

cdk
person barbarataku
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some of this was too gross and in my face,BUT I am sure that he was treated like that. Some aurors are just as bad as the Death Eaters.It is a fine line between Police and Crimanals. In order to catch them you have to think like them. Any kind of War is not good, even if the reason for it is Right. War brings out the dark side and for some people it is never far from the surface. In reference to the story itself, Harry never seems to get a break does he. I am assuming the Voldy has left something of himself inside of Harry. Sure would like to revamp the wizard law system,do they have one. So far story is good but just a wee bit gross.
person War-chan
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*In a sing-songy vioce* Harry's Loseing Control! Harry's Loseing Control! YAY!!!!! ^_^ OOooo!!!!! What's Longbottom goin' ta do? Or.....better yet, what's Harry goin' ta do to Longbottom!? Does that "pain in the ass" comment have that oh so wonderful double meaning that I'm hopeing for? Severus was mpreg with lil'Draco!?!?!?! O.O;Wow. *jumping up&down* What's goin' to happen next!!! What's going to happen next!?!?!?!!?!??!!? Can't wait for the Update!!!! (which is just silly because of how fast you update!)

~Miss War-chan
=Knows that YOU know what she going to say! Sub!Severus!!!
person manx
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. Back in Chapter 8 you said something about Harry being a bad, bad boy. Is Neville the only one who knew Harry loved Severus? At one point you had Harry at Godric's Hollow and he saw Snape with Voldie and you said Snape had switched sides. I am confused. Everyone already thought he was on Voldie's side after killing Dumbledore, but Harry then thought he was on the side of the light after Sev started Owling him things. Did that mean that Harry then thought he was really on Voldie's side at that point? And, oh yes....A-A-A-H-H-H-!!!! That's me screaming at the cliffie you left us with.