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for Jail Bird Choir

by harriet

person Isadax
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still here !
But I am quite lost by now. That is really not the kind of story I was expecting ( and I don't really like dark Harry).
Keep going. I am so curious.
person Morbid_incubus
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Psh if people can't handle it they need to grow up. I love this story and I will be following it closely. You have a very creative mind and a way with words. Don't let others get you down. You're right, you write for yourself and others such as me reap the rewards. And I love cliffhangers though they annoy me -smirks- Very well done.

~Mew~
person Donavon
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You haven't lost me, I just didn't read it until today. Had to work, life's a bitch!!

I thought it was a brilliant hard chapter, where the characters just gave in to their basic
cruel side. We've all got one, and I think we would be pretty boring.

As for the last chapter, that was a twist I didn't see coming. I really liked your twist on the
prophesy. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.
person Barbara
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't let Harry loose and don't let Severus loose Harry to this. Great update.
person Aoimoku
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic. I have read worst incest scenes.
I am worried to see what happens to Harry/Voldie next.
Please update soon.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Curious. 42 degrees? Must be C not F. I envy you. Good chapter.

cdk
person Miki
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... you can't stop there.. there must be more.. they save harry right? he comes back maybe not all good but at least some so they can be the balance of eachother and he and severus can be together? right? please.... i hate unhappy endings. but harry has to be stronger then he is bring right at the moment right. well i am still reading as you can see.. well read really whatever. ok so update soon.

Miki
person Barbara
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intense. Poor Severus to endure this and want to and poor Harry who can not stop it.
person Miki
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry's gonna' be mad.. IF he finds out Draco is as good as dead. i don't even thing Severus could stop him if he tried. well killing him but thats about it. squeeked me just a bit.. but i stuck it out and mostly intact. i think *looks around* yeah i am. ok so if severus is going to find Lucius then that leaves Harry with Draco.. that is not a good thing. they hate eachother.. oh i hope draco does not get chaty and tell me what him and severus have been doing just to throw it in his face.. cuz i could so see him doing something like that just because he can. oh well hope you update soon. great chapter.

Miki
person lady_void
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey another great story! keep going. your one of my fav writers :-)
just wanted to ask what had happened to 'Thicker than water'
i was really soo good! please dont have stopped writing it!