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for Potter's Field

by WynterRose

person lira-carta
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was sooo sad
good plot, although the flow of the writing seemed a little akward at times (to me anyway), i think it may be the short sentences and the repetition of the name voldemort and the word savior may be something to look at.
poor draco,and poor harry. great story, hope to see more of your writing in the future.
person swirly
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniff*
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sad! I hope Draco gets his wish!
person Alison
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man was that sad!! But what an awesome story! =o)