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for A Royal Flush

by slygriff21

person Scree
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story. Please, please update, I'm on the edge of my seat!
person lisa
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh nooo. no way. I cannot believe that happened man. lol i still love it anyways. it's sad though. just when they were doing good. a big ol fight and now they are not getting married. Poor Severus. he has suffered so much.and now it seems he lost Hermione. I hope they work things out. and Hermione is being a bit self absorbed but I see her point and his point. gosh thats tough. update soon please. Keep up the good work.
person firefly2
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you...you...you are so EVIL! no, beyond evil! evil is good compared to breaking off HG/SS!!!!!! *tears rolling sown face* how could you bb-e so m--m-meannnn? *wails and runs off*
person megan
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person Ania
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I know you just updated, however the impending battle is making me quite impatient for another update. :P Oh no, Severus called off the engagement... I wonder how this will affect Hermione and her emotional stablity, espically since this is the eve of the battle. Doing a great job with the story my dear!!
person BrianDarksoul
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Winces after reading chap 22(23)*
Ohhhh That's got to leave a mark psychologically.
I feel sorry for severus. War hgas iyt's casualties and the poor bastard is copping it in a way thet most men fear.

Goddamnit. You certainlly know how to dance on the emotional edge of things.
The confrontation was so raw and jumbled just like real life to have a rollercoaster effect.

I hope things become better soon at the moment things are so raw and estranged... What an emotional trainwreck.
person Barbara
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! I hope that Albus and the others can help calm down Severus and Hermione and they can reunite before the battle or will something happen to poor Severus that helps bring then together again??? Update soon.
person angel
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. poor sev and ginny .. i hope they can get back to their love ones...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person foofie
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am just loving this story. you have to keep going with it. i need to know what happens
person megan
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
get chap. but short plz update soon