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for A Royal Flush

by slygriff21

person Anon
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i that i really like your story and that i hope that you will finish it and update soon!!
person angel
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. soo mione is going to become the next queen and she love severus ... please please more i would love to read more ... please update soon and later for now

angel
person Lady Voldemort
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story you are very talented! I hope to read more.
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
tee hee hee great begining

I am so glad that Lucius got his but how did Voldermort know that Herms wasn't who she was suppossed to be? Is he that smart? You must update soon. Love ya and tootles and lots of hugglebears.


Your sister
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Chuckling sarcastic after reading chapter 4*
Awe poor diddums? Scared Ikky Widdle you should be you asswipe!
*Starts up the 'it is yyour birthday dance' and looks around*
Go sevvie, Go sevvie, it's your birthday, it's your birthday! Boomshakalaka!

*notices a whole group of deatheaters facefaulrt and Voldmort sweatdrop*
*Voldmort to no-one impaticular*
Ok who swiped Darksoul's meds or gave the psycho red cordial. That's just plain creepy and freaky seeing that psycho sing and dance like that!

*Cho chang hiding Brian's Meds*
I don't know what your talking about?
*Albus Dumbledore hidiong a Red Cordial decanter behind him*
He must be happy that Cho here said yes to be his lover and betrothed.

*Voldmort groans in mortyification*
Just what I need mini psychotic wizards/witches nipping at my heels in a few years time LOVELEY!
*Stated sarcastic*
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. you are one of my favorite writers, plaese up date soon
person June W
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - interesting start! I'm curious what the title means, so I'm hoping the next chapter explains it. Glad to see another story from you!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Keep writing.
person Barbara
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this. Update soon.
person QueenRuby
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok you got me I now sitting here wishing there was more then one chapter posted. Oh well I'll go work on my story while I wait. Keep writing please.