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for A Royal Flush

by slygriff21

person kathyjo
schedule January 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person mlui
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the plot of this story very much. It's an enjoyable and intriguing read. There were very few grammatical mistakes this time. =) I think you could put more depth and emotion in the characters, especially during the second half of the story and near the end. It got overly fluffy near the end and portraying the characters with more emotion and depth can prevent the story appearing overly fluffy and a bit on the non-realistic side. Anyways, it was a very enjoyable royal affair! =)
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person ~*~Tasha~*~
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool and interesting plot twists and ideas. Nice work.
person allie
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant belive ur beta would do that what a fucker.
person sinbad
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was an absolutely wonderful story. I see no reason why a auther can't bend her characters in his/her story. I bekieve content is much more important than the story is canon, Au or whatever. When I read a story I look at the internal integrity. Does the story make sense? Does it flow well? Is there any glaring plot problems? I found this story intriging and plesent. Good job!
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?