rate_review Reviews

good chapter, bye

i like the plot, sorta. and i like the mate idea, but honestly harry gets raped and has a baby named brook just cos? james got married to lily but really was mated to sirius and some how comes back from the dead? eh. and it was very rushed. i think you should finish writing it then come back to it and rework the entire thing. it seems very newbie-ish and it seems like you have a lot of ideas in your head, good ideas, but are unsure how to sort them out. keep working at it. it gets better.

*glares* i hate cliffies *glares*

That was great I love it.There not enough stories with that pairing they are so good togehter