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by LeoZodiac

person MyFictionalAnnihilation
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I am addicted to everything you write, so said by this direct quote in an email to my friend "Leozodiac is my hero, everything I read and am like wow this was good who
person Hambares
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thanx for such a quick update. Awful to leave it at a cliffhanger. Can't wait for more!
person jw
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story i hope to read more soon
person Ameera
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story. Two things though. One: Harry's reaction to Sirus and James coming back was a bit flat. Still good though. Two: The ending of each minni section seems a bit weak. You should expand some of them to a few more sentences. Describe something, you know what I mean? I'm really looking forward to your next chapter!
person Hambares
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Great start! I can't wait to see how Remus and Snape find out and how they fit into all of this!
person Good Witch
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update quickly. This is great!! Evil cliffhanger though
person anon
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hhmm interesting. And while your stories are intersting do they all have to have Harry's dad James or both his parents in them? Just wondering a couple of them seem like they would be just a good without one or both of them showing up. Anyway thx for posting
person dragonclaw21974
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. I like it alot. Can't wait to read what happens next.
person Indolence
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update!! THis is sooo beautiful!!!!! :D
person NightOwl
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I love it, is they going to accept harry baby too after they mate. please update soon.